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Daractive [05.05.12, 22:23]
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Dear Paul
How are you? I was on a trip in Egypt. The trip lasted three weeks. I got there by plane, with my parents and sister. The road was long, but I was not bored, because I had a very interesting book. We are stayed in a hotel. The weather was very nice, but the nights were terribly cold. We visited the Great Sphinx of Giza and the Mortuary Temple of Hatshepsut. We took a lot of photos. The best thing about the trip was trying new meals. Can you visit me tomorrow? I will show you the photographs.



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    KrolGosci [05.05.12, 22:30]
    humanista
    Dear Paul How are you? I was on a trip in Egypt. The trip lasted three weeks. I got there by plane, with my parents and sister. The trip was long, but I was not bored, because I had very interesting book. We were stayed in a hotel. The weather was very nice, but the nights were terribly cold. We visited the Great Sphinx of Giza and the Mortuary Temple of Hatshepsut. We took a lot of photos. The best thing about the trip was new meals i have tried. Can you visit me tomorrow? I will show you photographs.

    Jak kur|es "we were" w past simple. Z tym meals to przekombinowałeś jak już coś co "I had tried"
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    humanista [05.05.12, 22:28]
    humanista
    Dear Paul How are you? I was on a trip in Egypt. The trip lasted three weeks. I got there by plane, with my parents and sister. The trip was long, but I was not bored, because I had very interesting book. We were stayed at hotel. The weather was very nice, but the nights were terribly cold. We visited the Great Sphinx of Giza and the Mortuary Temple of Hatshepsut. We took a lot of photos. The best thing about the trip were new meals i have tried. Can you visit me tomorrow? I will show you photographs.
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    humanista [05.05.12, 22:27]
    Dear Paul
    How are you? I was on a trip in Egypt. The trip lasted three weeks. I got there by plane, with my parents and sister. The trip was long, but I was not bored, because I had very interesting book. We were stayed in a hotel. The weather was very nice, but the nights were terribly cold. We visited the Great Sphinx of Giza and the Mortuary Temple of Hatshepsut. We took a lot of photos. The best thing about the trip was new meals i have tried. Can you visit me tomorrow? I will show you photographs.
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    KrolGosci [05.05.12, 22:26]
    "The trip was long"
    "We stayed at a hotel"
    Ogólnie to całkiem poprawnie ale prosto.
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